Tears in the rain

Tears in the rain

— Mary, I can’t even wrap my head around the fact that you hate my mother this much. The mere fact that you showed up at her house caused her to have a stroke, and she’s getting worse by the day. I only asked you to stay with her for a week! It had been so long since we’d visited that I even had to hire a local girl to help her out. It can’t be a coincidence—you arrive, and that very same day she’s bedridden. My God, is this becoming a family trait? First my sister was ready to do anything for money, and now you? You always said you couldn’t stand her back when we lived with my parents, but now you’ve clearly decided to take the opportunity to send her to the grave early! — William screamed into his phone at his wife.

The harsh, unfair words made Mary’s heart sink, and tears welled in her eyes. Even in her worst nightmare, she couldn’t have imagined being accused of such a crime. And by whom? Her own husband, the man she adored.

As a parting shot, William told her he was flying in the next day to try and catch his mother while she was still alive—and God help Mary if she had anything to do with it.

A thunderhead swept across the sky, unleashing a heavy summer downpour that refreshed the streets, soaked the thirsty fields, and watered the small rose garden belonging to Mrs. Eleanor Higgins, an eighty-year-old widow.

At that moment, standing in her yard, she gazed lovingly at her wonderful flowerbed. Having taken her fill of the view, the elderly woman leaned heavily on her cane and made her way to her cozy gazebo, where a pot of hot tea and a plate of fresh shortbread cookies waited. Sitting on the bench, Eleanor looked wistfully over her small estate, where she had lived alone for many years.

She had buried her husband over a decade ago. Her daughter, Sarah, had left home back when she was in college, all because of money. Sarah had been obsessed with it, constantly demanding more from her parents while completely neglecting her studies. The dean had called several times, warning that if things didn’t change, Sarah would face expulsion—and not even her father’s local influence could save her. It wasn’t long before the inevitable happened: their daughter was kicked out in her senior year. After that, her parents flatly refused to keep funding her lifestyle. The argument had been explosive; Sarah packed her bags and walked out for good. Since then, Eleanor hadn’t heard a word from her. Rumor around the small town was that Sarah had married some shady character and moved to Chicago, but the old woman didn’t know for sure.

Besides her daughter, Eleanor had a son, William—a wonderful man who never forgot his mother and did his best to help. However, he and his wife lived abroad, and visits were few and far between. Lately, Eleanor felt her age catching up to her; every day it became harder to manage the house. That’s why her son had contacted an agency to find her a “companion,” as she jokingly called the help. In fact, she was expecting the girl from the agency at any moment.

Just then, a young couple—a man and a woman—approached the house, having just stepped off the bus.

— We’ll work the old lady over quick. I figure we can wrap this up in a month, — said the tall, slightly hunched man in a baseball cap to his companion.

— I’m scared, Justin. I never thought I’d be capable of something like this, — the girl replied, her voice trembling with anxiety.

— Look, there’s no turning back. You love me, right? You want to keep me out of prison. I owe so much money that this old lady is our only shot. She’s got one foot in the grave anyway; it won’t matter. Your job is just to get her to trust you. I’ll handle the rest.

Discussing their plan, they reached the house. Right on schedule, the doorbell rang. On the porch stood a very pretty, smiling young woman, with a modest-looking young man beside her.

— Good morning, Mrs. Higgins. I’m Allison, here to help you with the housework.

The girl radiated such kindness that Eleanor immediately felt they would become friends. At the very least, she’d have someone to talk to. Like many elderly people, Eleanor was trusting to a fault once she took a liking to someone.

She even found a place in the house for Allison’s husband, a supposed “jack-of-all-trades,” since the poor boy apparently had nowhere else to stay. Eleanor couldn’t have been happier with her new helpers. Every day, Allison handled the chores: cooking, cleaning, and laundry.

Justin really did have “golden hands.” He could fix a fence or replace a lock. He set to work repairing the shed roof. It saved her money since she didn’t have to hire contractors. The old woman was left with nothing to do but enjoy the quiet and sip tea in her gazebo.

Allison always served the tea and even stirred the sugar in for her. The drink always had a peculiar, slightly tart aftertaste—a flavor the old woman had never encountered. When she asked about it, Allison would just wave it off, saying it was an old family recipe passed down through generations. The only thing troubling Eleanor was her rapidly declining health, but she chalked it up to old age and the weather.

A month prior, a pale Justin had sat in a small roadside diner. Sitting across from him were two burly men with shaved heads. In their massive hands, the coffee cups looked like tiny toys, especially when they lifted them to their mouths with pinkies extended—something they’d read was the height of etiquette. But the conversation was deadly serious, and it wasn’t going Justin’s way.

— So, partner, we put a lot of cash into our venture, and thanks to you, it’s gone south. You really have to try hard to manage things that poorly.

— What are we gonna do with you, Justin? — the second heavy added. — That money needs to be paid back.

— Guys, I’ll get it all back. Just give me a little time to figure things out. You know me, I’ll find the money if I promised…

— That’s exactly why we’re giving you a chance. It’s a serious amount, so you’ve got three months. Not a day more. After that, we stop talking with words. For instance, we might have a talk with your lovely wife. You wouldn’t want that pretty face of hers getting messed up, would you?

Justin knew these men weren’t joking. If they made a threat, they followed through.

“Why the hell did I get involved with them?” he thought as he rode the bus home. He’d already had to sell his car to cover debts, and he was living in a cramped apartment with Allison and his mother-in-law, Sarah.

Living with his wife’s mother was no picnic, but he had no choice. As he entered the apartment, he heard Sarah’s voice from the small but tidy kitchen. She was on the phone with her brother, William.

Allison had told Justin the story: her mother had fought with her parents over thirty years ago, and they’d told her they never wanted to see her again. They hadn’t spoken since; Sarah was a proud woman, even if she had been reckless in her youth. But she stayed in touch with her brother, strictly forbidding him from telling their parents. Their father had passed away years ago, leaving only the grandmother living out her days in the big family house.

At first, Justin didn’t pay much attention to the conversation, but as he caught the gist, he began to soak up every word. They were talking about hiring someone to help the old woman. As soon as he heard that, a desperate idea for easy money flashed through his mind—a way to pay off his debts and have some left over.

Waiting for his mother-in-law to hang up, he apologized for eavesdropping and suggested that he and Allison go help the old lady. He argued that Allison had always wanted to see her grandmother, and they had nothing else to do. His business had collapsed, so they could earn a little money, enjoy the countryside, and give Sarah some space. Sarah found the idea sensible. Deep down, she had wanted to reconcile with her mother since she never got the chance with her father.

When Allison came home, they discussed it as a trio. She loved her husband’s suggestion. The only thing they agreed on was to tell William that the “companion” had been found through an agency to keep things professional.

That same evening, Justin called two old “associates”—men of questionable morals. He couldn’t pull this off without them. Tony was a chemist at a local pharmaceutical firm, and Mike was a crooked notary. Half an hour later, Justin met the chemist at a construction site. Tony handed over a small bag of white powder in exchange for a thick envelope of cash—money Justin had borrowed from acquaintances who didn’t yet know how broke he was.

— Is this stuff reliable? — Justin asked, eyeing the powder.

— Relax. When have I ever let you down? Just make sure she gets a dose every day. Within a month, she’ll be checking out. It was a nightmare to get this, so you owe me big time.

Eventually, Justin shared the full plan with his wife. Allison was initially horrified. He was suggesting they kill her own grandmother to seize the house and sell it. But he begged and pleaded, telling her his life was on the line. After a few days, Allison broke. She loved him so much that she agreed to commit the crime.

Once they moved in, Allison began spiking her grandmother’s tea daily. The poor woman started to fade. From a lively, cheerful senior, she turned into a confused, weakened shadow of herself. Every day was worse than the last.

One day, Allison brought a well-dressed man to the house, telling her grandmother he was from the Social Security Administration. She claimed there had been an error in her pension and it was being fixed, but she just needed to sign some forms. Eleanor felt so ill she could barely process what was happening. She signed everything they put in front of her.

This happened just one day before William sent his wife, Mary, to visit.

A triumphant Justin grabbed the signed documents—a deed of gift transferring the house to him—along with the remaining powder and the detailed “instruction manual” Tony had written explaining the lethal process. He decided to hide it all at his mother-in-law’s apartment until the old lady passed away and the dust settled.

It was a fatal mistake. Sarah was a neat freak who performed a deep clean of her apartment every single week. There wasn’t a corner her mop and broom didn’t reach. A few days later, she stumbled upon Justin’s hiding place. When she saw the contents, she was paralyzed with shock. No matter why she had fought with her mother, and no matter how much time had passed, she was still a daughter. According to the notes, Eleanor had a week to live, at most.

Meanwhile, back at the house, Mary was frantic with worry, fearing she really was the reason her mother-in-law had collapsed. When she arrived, the old woman had been weak and slow, but she could still move. Now, she lay paralyzed on her left side. The doctors didn’t even take her to the hospital, blaming it on her age. Mary had actually been impressed by the “agency” girl and her husband, who took care of the bedridden woman without complaint. It seemed Eleanor’s days were numbered.

A yellow taxi moved slowly down the highway toward the small, leafy town. Inside sat a woman in her fifties. With her heart in her throat, Sarah stared at the landmarks of her childhood. She had thought long and hard before taking this step after all these years. She was coming home to expose her daughter and son-in-law, and hopefully, to save her mother. She had already called the police and was waiting for them near the house when she ran into her brother, William. She told him everything.

William was livid. He stormed into the house, shaking the deed and the bag of poison in front of a stunned Justin and Allison. Justin tried to deny it, but Allison couldn’t hold it in anymore. She collapsed in tears and confessed everything. Justin tried to jump out a window, smashing the glass with a stool, but he didn’t get far before the police intercepted him.

Sarah knew they were headed for prison. A daughter and her husband who plotted to kill a helpless old woman deserved nothing less. Fortunately, they hadn’t finished the job. Eleanor was rushed to the hospital, and once the toxins were out of her system, she began to recover rapidly. She was overjoyed that Sarah had finally come home, though William had to spend a long time apologizing to Mary for ever suspecting her.

Justin and Allison received lengthy prison sentences for attempted murder. Their accomplices, the chemist and the notary, went down with them. Soon after, the reunited family gathered in Eleanor’s gazebo. There was a lingering sadness, but they had to move forward.

The last thing the old woman said to her granddaughter and Justin before they were taken away was:

— How could you do this? I would have given you the house myself. I would have given you everything I have, if only to save you.

Tears of late-coming regret fell from their eyes, but it was too late. You can’t undo the past.

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